teacher feedback :Comments: Slide 2: What’s the actual research question?? Slide 3: You need to paraphrase content better. You can do this more briefly. I can see you’ve taken parts of sentences here and changed words out. Slide 4: title should be lactic acid/lactate. Detail here should be a little more detailed on how pyruvate becomes converted to lactate, focus less on the steps of anaerobic glycolysis, and more on pyruvate/lactate. Make picture bigger, and I think you can find a better one to be honest. Slide 5: take a snapshot from the pdf image, not an image from your phone. Cover the findings in a touch more detail here, then get to mechanisms on next slide. Slide 6: should focus on lactate kinetics with recovery. Slide 7: Your question is about lactate clearance. NOT if lactate causes fatigue. You can note this in the intro or briefly near the end, but the physiology should be how lactate enters and leaves the blood stream. Are their specific transporters? Gluconeogenesis? Slide 8: VO2 max is not really related to this research question at all. Stay on topic. Slide 9: Again, your research question is not if lactate causes fatigue, its whether exercise intensity changes lactate clearance. You can maybe have a dot point or two whether its related to fatigue (especially as limitation of the study), but it shouldn’t be your focus. Grammar in some titles is poor (such as the slide 9 title)