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I need the first draft of my paper to be revised based on the feedback my professor gave me.
Date Posted: 11/04/2021
Category: English
Due Date: 11/04/2021
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  • Hi, You wrote this paper originally and it is a really good paper. I got some feedback from my professor to change few small things. Please make changes based on the feedback without changing the whole paper.
    User_27217 | Apr 11, 2021, 15:50 PM
  • Hello, how much time do I have?
    Thetutor | Apr 11, 2021, 15:52 PM
  • I can send it tomorrow at 7 am; is that ok?
    Thetutor | Apr 11, 2021, 15:56 PM
  • no i need it by 12 tonight
    User_27217 | Apr 12, 2021, 00:07 AM
  • please
    User_27217 | Apr 12, 2021, 00:07 AM
  • ????
    User_27217 | Apr 12, 2021, 02:22 AM
  • I already asked my professor for an extension and she said no please do as much as you can but before 12 please
    User_27217 | Apr 12, 2021, 02:23 AM
  • Hello, I am still working on it; what is the time there?
    Thetutor | Apr 12, 2021, 04:14 AM
  • what is the time there?
    Thetutor | Apr 12, 2021, 04:44 AM
  • Hello, the final draft assignment is ready as promised; kindly review it, make the payment and recommend me in the site. Let me know when you have a new assignment. Thank you
    Thetutor | Apr 12, 2021, 05:38 AM
  • Hello friend! So my professor got your work and she just emailed me saying that the paper has 37% similarity from the Turnitin report and that she would not give me credit for it. Please can you fix that?
    User_27217 | Apr 15, 2021, 14:26 PM
  • I Will recheck on it
    Thetutor | Apr 15, 2021, 14:34 PM
  • This is for the annotated bibliography. I will attach a file my professor sent me. My main concern is that the sources of the bibliography are connected with my recommendation report. If my recommendation report also shows to have similarity from a Turnitin report I will fail the course or worse get kicked out of the university.
    User_27217 | Apr 15, 2021, 19:44 PM
  • is the revision on the annotation or the final draft?
    Thetutor | Apr 15, 2021, 19:45 PM
  • Annotation
    User_27217 | Apr 15, 2021, 19:47 PM
  • I just uploaded the file. Please take a look, I have to submit both of the assignments before this Sunday.
    User_27217 | Apr 15, 2021, 19:49 PM
  • seen it but it is like you added some sections of the annotation; that is not the annotation I send to you
    Thetutor | Apr 15, 2021, 19:56 PM
  • check file 2; that is the annotation I has send
    Thetutor | Apr 15, 2021, 19:59 PM
  • send me a word doc of the annotation; the one you had presented
    Thetutor | Apr 15, 2021, 20:13 PM
  • file 2 is for another assignment I send you is not the one I need. That's for a different class. Can you check right now and send me the right annotated bibliography related to mental health during COVID.
    User_27217 | Apr 15, 2021, 22:03 PM
  • send me the word doc that you presented
    Thetutor | Apr 15, 2021, 22:05 PM
  • I just sent you the assignment that I submitted. It is the same assignment that the professor checked in Turnitin.
    User_27217 | Apr 15, 2021, 22:14 PM
  • I just got an email and was told I have to submit the bibliography assignment before 12 am Saturday. Please let me know what's the status?
    User_27217 | Apr 16, 2021, 16:59 PM
  • Hello, the assignments are ready as promised; kindly review them
    Thetutor | Apr 17, 2021, 07:24 AM
  • Friend this is not my assignment. The assignment I asked for above, is the annotated bibliography. The Annotated Bibliography is the 6 sources assignment you used to write "Mental Health Surveys to Aid Mental Health Issues in the Northeastern University" paper. The 6 sources assignment you have for the paper had 37% similarity on Turnitin. Please take another look......
    User_27217 | Apr 19, 2021, 04:43 AM
  • So sorry; I have just uploaded the right tasks; files 5 and 6
    Thetutor | Apr 19, 2021, 04:46 AM
  • Please I will pay you again for your time if needed. I need this asap or I will fail the class. I just asked my professor for an extension with hope she will allow it although it's a second chance and it's so late.
    User_27217 | Apr 19, 2021, 04:48 AM
  • I already send it; file 5 is the work and 6 is the turnitin report; please check
    Thetutor | Apr 19, 2021, 04:48 AM
  • I hope the paper "Mental Health Surveys to Aid Mental Health Issues in the Northeastern University" will pass Turnitin. I am worried because these two assignments are linked together. I will attach one more time all the files so you can take a second look.
    User_27217 | Apr 19, 2021, 04:53 AM
  • I also revised the paper and sen a report; for the paper; use files 7 and 8
    Thetutor | Apr 19, 2021, 04:56 AM
  • I hope you got them; the plag ranages from 2-3%
    Thetutor | Apr 19, 2021, 05:03 AM
  • thank you so much I did get them...I don't know how to thank you
    User_27217 | Apr 19, 2021, 05:08 AM
  • it is ok my friend; you can just leave some reviews for me
    Thetutor | Apr 19, 2021, 05:09 AM
  • Hello friend. I uploaded my last paper revision for this paper you wrote. Please do you mind taking it because is a paper you wrote so you will knoe hos to revise it best. Thank you!
    User_27217 | Apr 25, 2021, 21:14 PM
  • please send me the link
    Thetutor | Apr 25, 2021, 21:18 PM
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