Feedback Comment: This is the feedback I received from the person grading my work: This is a very confusing essay. You cite a range of authors (some of whom are more relevant to the topic than others), but do not appear to have read or engaged with any of them. Moreover, while you do show a broad, if error-strewn, understanding of what is entailed by deliberative democracy (and here your conclusion played a very important role), you do not appear to have reflected on the problems, controversies, and issues covered in the course. In any case, to succeed in this essay, you needed to provide a much clearer account of the problem that any system of organisation and decision-making must address, and a clearer argument. I received 45 out of 100