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Date: 29/06/2021
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Project Details
Project Status: Completed
This work has been completed by: drjim
Total payment made for this project was: $15.14
Project Summary: In one of the first Colloquiums, you worked with articles/arguments that dealt with fiction. Many of you chose a movie or a television show from The Atlantic. Essentially, the writers at The Atlantic go deeper than simply laughing at jokes, wondering about plot, or crying through scenes. (...Did you notice the long series in the last sentence, by the way? That's an example of keeping a series parallel. Whenever you list a series, each part should use the exact same structure. You can check it by the parallel stack: laughing at jokes wondering about plot crying through scenes Notice the parallel structure. Each part of the series has a verb (in the same tense), a preposition, and a noun. Boom! That's parallelism! I had to stop and think about it as I wrote. I noticed I needed a series, so I had to consider the structure of each part. We rarely think in parallel structure. We rarely talk in parallel structure. But, we must write in parallel structure...)