Feedback Comment: On the first effort it was clear he didn’t read the instructions. Although he was very good in communication, and tried to make changes that were better they still weren’t at a satisfaction where I could submit it. I had to heavily revise it, and add elements to the paper that were missed even though it was in the instructions and guide. I could tell he didn’t have experience in the subject matter, which I wish he would’ve told me. He was receptive to the feedback and did well on another part of the assignment which was the poster.